Talk about yourself first and not about your work. Also, make up your mind when it comes to how traditional or modern you are. Remember, we are all modern in terms of the tools we use such as the Internet, smartphones, television, to name a few. Doing what everybody does in this day and age doesn’t make you modern! Taking a contradictory stance in the same sentence as you see below only confuses prospective matches. In the below example, you have very little information about the person other than a contradictory statement!
On behalf of my brother- I come from an upper middle class family. The most important thing in my life is religious believes, moral values & respect for elders. I am modern thinker but also believe in good values given by our ancestors. I love to spend quality time with my friends & Family. After completion of my post graduation i am preparing for competitive exam.
i am grand son of freedom fighter .I belong to the Brahmin - Bhumihar caste and am looking for a match from the same community. To describe about my family, we are a joint family with strong traditional values. I reside in the beautiful city of Munger.